What do you think of my writing?

I braced myself as i prepared to embark the three moths i was entitled too at Jenson High School to get full freshmen credit. i wouldn't even mind having to redo the entire year; education was less than a priority in my accumalating list of problems. It was Jake who insisted. The world looped around me in unsettling waves and i caught myself before crashing to the ground. Hang in there, Brit, I thought, pushing into the school corridor. Instantly, I was hit with a buzz of activity and I let out a sigh of relief. From as far as i could see, I was granted the gift of obscurity, even for the shortest of time. - not one of my best pieces but i literally wrote this plot at the top of my head, ha.